Im going to try to be honest, so dont hate me if my critic's bad :c

okay, so i like the thick outline outside the drawing, it kinda makes it look nicer :3 i like most of the shading (a little bit is off in my opinion, kind of around the fur on her neck .~. i hope i didnt sound mean...) i was wondering, have you considered using a soft eraser tool to smooth out the shading, and or add lighting to the picture? : i think it would really improve many pictures in the future ^^

well, thats what i think about the picture :3 over all, this pic's really nice





and so cute ~ewe~